Sunday, January 20, 2013

Guest Review : Dirty Zero by Kyle Adams

Today we present a guest review from Naoko Smith.

Naoko is the author of As Pleases My General - a raunchy kitchen table fable and A Werewolf in Office Clothing (both of which are available as free downloads from Smashwords) as well as the novel A Match for the el Maiens. She is also the woman behind the Feminist Erotica and Erotica Writer's Bloc blogs.

Dirty Zero by Kyle Adams




Hilarious and hot, here's one about a shy boy and comic-book heroes.

On the outside Wyatt is shy and geeky
Inside Wyatt’s a bit freaky and likes it kinky.
Brian’s nice, charming, and hot as hell
That stud makes Wyatt’s dick Swell
An invite to a costume party Wyatt can’t refuse
Was there actually a party or is it just a ruse
Wyatt gets a shock when he isn’t allowed to leave
The night is full of surprises that he can’t believe

I love the writing style in this first book about Wyatt and Brian, Moltenman and Darkfist, Dirty Zero. The seriously sexy passages are occasionally shafted by hilariously über-real reflections such as who is lying in the wet spot. Brian is perhaps a tad too gorgeous and bold for realism but other characters including incidental women are believable people.

This is a laugh out loud funny story as well as a steamy set of sex scenes. Because of the layout of Smashwords profiles, I didn't realise at first that the short description is a poem - what a typically funny touch from someone with a great writing talent and a sense of humour as well.

For more funny gay erotica check out Kyle's Smashword page. All of his ebooks are currently free.


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